Marcline the Vampire Queen perched on her bed, entertaining herself with her Axe-Bass. She wasn't feeling as accustomed as before-or any other time before this.
"UGH! Come on! Get it right!" she yelled at herself for spoiling the song she was playing.
Dishearted over the mistake, she laid aside her instrument and speculated what was the cause of her recent odd behaviors. Normally, she could go by the day without notice but for the last month, she could hardly avoid a trance of thought. A shade of red would silence her hungers but recently she barely felt a tickle of starvation. Loneliness was all Marceline wanted as well. Lastly, she's acknowledged over the fact that she's been caring more over her appearence. Wearing only spotless clothes whenever she left her home.
The ring of her doorbell broke her train of thought.
Casually, she went to her lower floor and answered the entryway to find an out of breathe Finn. Somehow she felt glad to see her human friend.
"Mar.....celine... I got... you some.....thing" said Finn.
"Finn, you know I'm not into getting presents" replied Marceline.
"No...you'll like it....I swear. Close your eyes."
Knowing Finn well enough, the Vampire Queen did as her friend asked.
"Okay.... open 'em!" said a happy Finn.
Marceline's eyes grew wider as she recalled what Finn held in his hands. Hambo.
Slowly she took the old teddy bear. "How?" she asked.
"Ash. After gettin some info off him, I found the witch's hut and got it from her."
"But, witches never give up anything they own"
"Not when it's asked for by a hero!"
Filled with happiness, Marceline shed a tear of joy and hugged Finn tightly. Unable to stay longer, Finn retired from Marceline's house to continue his adventures.
Marceline looked at her childhood toy. Since her boyfriend Ash, sold it to a witch, she never thought would see it again.
"Wait..." she said to herself.
While she hugged Finn she felt a warmness in her and couldn't solve it. Once more, she peered at the toy, smelled it, to discover Finn's scent on it. Again the warmness came back but faded once Finn's scent was replaced by her own. Marceline then lay her hand on her chest.
"What is this feeling?"
Finnally after long hesitation it's been started! Comment and enjoy!
this is prefect for The-Freak-Dolls
owowowwewe hohoho cooollll
He started her heart... Literally.
I was pleasantly surprised when I read this. VERY pleasantly surprised. DA doesn't exactly have a good rep for fanfiction. I've read tons of stuff on here that's been...well.... CRUD. Yeah, but this. This is AWESOME. It's well-written, there aren't any spelling errors, the story is interesting, and everyone seems in-character pretty much... Great job dude! I can't wait to see the next chapter!
thank you I've never been complimented like that before so a thousand thanks and no worries MORE will be put up and I'll enjoy putting them up since...... well you'll see
Hoorah, more Finnceline. That's always a good thing.
darn im to late o well i still keep wrighting mine
Don't worry too much about coming to the party late, home slizzle. I can assure you this isn't the first fic to be published that contains this "Hambo" premise.
how about A Finnceline Story
AWWW hope you make more >w<
This is nice, I like it.
a thousand thank yous