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Marcline the Vampire Queen perched on her bed, entertaining herself with her Axe-Bass. She wasn't feeling as accustomed as before-or any other time before this.

"UGH! Come on! Get it right!" she yelled at herself for spoiling the song she was playing.

Dishearted over the mistake, she laid aside her instrument and speculated what was the cause of her recent odd behaviors. Normally, she could go by the day without notice but for the last month, she could hardly avoid a trance of thought. A shade of red would silence her hungers but recently she barely felt a tickle of starvation. Loneliness was all Marceline wanted as well. Lastly, she's acknowledged over the fact that she's been caring more over her appearence. Wearing only spotless clothes whenever she left her home.

The ring of her doorbell broke her train of thought.

Casually, she went to her lower floor and answered the entryway to find an out of breathe Finn. Somehow she felt glad to see her human friend.

"Mar.....celine... I got... you some.....thing" said Finn.

"Finn, you know I'm not into getting presents" replied Marceline.

"No...you'll like it....I swear. Close your eyes."

Knowing Finn well enough, the Vampire Queen did as her friend asked.

"Okay.... open 'em!" said a happy Finn.

Marceline's eyes grew wider as she recalled what Finn held in his hands. Hambo.

Slowly she took the old teddy bear. "How?" she asked.

"Ash. After gettin some info off him, I found the witch's hut and got it from her."

"But, witches never give up anything they own"

"Not when it's asked for by a hero!"

Filled with happiness, Marceline shed a tear of joy and hugged Finn tightly. Unable to stay longer, Finn retired from Marceline's house to continue his adventures.

Marceline looked at her childhood toy. Since her boyfriend Ash, sold it to a witch, she never thought would see it again.

"Wait..." she said to herself.

While she hugged Finn she felt a warmness in her and couldn't solve it. Once more, she peered at the toy, smelled it, to discover Finn's scent on it. Again the warmness came back but faded once Finn's scent was replaced by her own. Marceline then lay her hand on her chest.

"What is this feeling?"
Finnally after long hesitation it's been started! Comment and enjoy!
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tuchamaca90 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Professional Writer
This father
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
muchos gracias
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014
???
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tuchamaca90 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Professional Writer
esta padre
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:iconshadowwolflord:
ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
?
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tuchamaca90 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Professional Writer
This father

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mewt66 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Professional General Artist
this is prefect for The-Freak-Dolls
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012
which is?
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mewt66 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Professional General Artist
IT A CLUB 4 WEIRD AND CUTE DOLLS THEY CAN BE DRAWINGS OR A STORYs
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012
ah okay
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mewt66 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Professional General Artist
so will you let ib in the club ? pleas
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012
done
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mewt66 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Professional General Artist
cool
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mewt66 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012  Professional General Artist
owowowwewe hohoho cooollll
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stellasunstar Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012
like?
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Purplestar31 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Hobbyist
:icontinoplz: That was quick. Can't wait to see part two.
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DitzlercommaGreyson Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
He started her heart... Literally.
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
yes he did lol
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TheStinkyFoot Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
I was pleasantly surprised when I read this. VERY pleasantly surprised. DA doesn't exactly have a good rep for fanfiction. I've read tons of stuff on here that's been...well.... CRUD. Yeah, but this. This is AWESOME. It's well-written, there aren't any spelling errors, the story is interesting, and everyone seems in-character pretty much... Great job dude! I can't wait to see the next chapter! :D
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
thank you I've never been complimented like that before so a thousand thanks and no worries MORE will be put up and I'll enjoy putting them up since...... well you'll see
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TheStinkyFoot Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
Sure dude! No problem! Peeps be needin' in-depth review for their shiz man! :hug: Can't wait to see it!
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
cool!
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flappysyrup21 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
i'M SPeeCHLeSS :iconiloveyouplz:
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
oh thank you!
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flappysyrup21 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
STiLL SPeeCHLeSS aND YouR WeLCoMe
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
lol!
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chaos-neverthrive Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hoorah, more Finnceline. That's always a good thing.
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011
yes yes that's true and more will be up soon
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chaos-neverthrive Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That's good news.
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011
yup it is
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CantZ501 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011
darn im to late o well i still keep wrighting mine
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chaos-neverthrive Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't worry too much about coming to the party late, home slizzle. I can assure you this isn't the first fic to be published that contains this "Hambo" premise.
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011
how about A Finnceline Story
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:iconcantz501:
CantZ501 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
My Hambo one works up to it like yours. An I like where you went with yours.
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
hm.....there WAS and alternate incident i had in mind instead of this one....
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CantZ501 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
Id read it.
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2011
sweet
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CantZ501 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011
I love the second one
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2011
oh thank you
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FlippyandFlakyfan Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011
AWWW hope you make more >w<
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011
oh yes there's MUCH more
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FlippyandFlakyfan Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011
YEAY!!!!!!!
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DeadEye95 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011
This is nice, I like it.
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:iconshadowwolflord:
ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011
a thousand thank yous
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DeadEye95 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011
No problem
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011
more will be up soon
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DeadEye95 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011
Great, looking forward to it.
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PrincessLeticia Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
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This go to my faves
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ShadowWolfLord Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011
oh much obliged!
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